Hey Iziah, it's Amber here I really liked your slide about the titanic, there are a few mistakes in there, but overall it was good, I never knew that a guy was shooting other men and then shot themself, your spelling and grammar was really good! The drawings were really good! I hope to be seeing more amazing stuff on your blog!! -Amber P.S. click onto my name and it will take you to my blog.
Hi My name is JackS I go to Kaniere school i really Like your passion project about the titanic i really Like it when william murdoch shot him self in the hed
Hey Iziah, it's Amber here I really liked your slide about the titanic, there are a few mistakes in there, but overall it was good, I never knew that a guy was shooting other men and then shot themself, your spelling and grammar was really good! The drawings were really good! I hope to be seeing more amazing stuff on your blog!!
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P.S. click onto my name and it will take you to my blog.
thanks amber ill try my best for my next passion project
DeleteHi My name is JackS I go to Kaniere school i really Like your passion project about the titanic i really Like it when william murdoch shot him self in the hed
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